Review for We Killjoys are a FAMILY and we UNITE!!!

We Killjoys are a FAMILY and we UNITE!!!

(#) ChasingPavementsxoxo 2012-02-19

Love the plot, great job with the auditions i love my character. Everything seems to run together though, the flow of it is weird. Like, the actual story is great. The grammar you write with is a bit hard to read. I really love the story tho.

And, uh, don't hate me for saying that stuffz lol

xxIzzy