I admit I went and read the earlier version to get the remaining three posted chapters, which is maybe not what you want people to do.
I really like this story, and I have liked it more as it has gone on. I hope once you are finished revising, you manage to keep going with it!
Author's response
Hi Circaea,
Actually, I'd rather people read the fic on Fanfiction.net. :)
I've spent the morning trying to post another half dozen chapters, at around 10mins each, only to find that the site had screwed up the numbering, and I ended up with 2 chapter 16s and 3 chapter 18s. I couldn't do anything to correct the chapter numbering problems, so I had to delete them. I don't know when I'll find the enthusiasm to try reposting them here again. I've emailed the admin about the problems, but I won't hold my breath waiting for a reply.
Link to the fic on fanfiction.net is here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7808517
Cheers, & thanks for reviewing.
Brian