Review for Howl
Flabbergasted is a fecking epic word. Helpless hazel (snorts) pretty awesome color, if it were. Definitely imagine the Crayola in there my friend.
I don't mind the change in writing style, I like this style a lot and I didn't get confused (as I so often do... Oh the joys of not being the brightest crayon in the box [ha, crayons...I have issues, I'm sure you can tell]).
No one seemed terrible OOC (out of Character), but really, this story seems to only be starting... Or it was rushed. Sue me I can't tell!!
To sum up all the shit that came out of my...hands? I liked it! XD (do you prefer xD or XD? I can't decide myself, they both make you seem kind of silly/stupid)
Author's response
Thanks for the review! I'll have to ask Allie a little more about character attitude. O.o
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I use xD more often than XD, but that's just me. :3
- Ben