O.o woah. That's sad... and kind of bipolar, Frank. Whatever. We all go off our rocker at some point, I guess.
Anyway, I really liked it. I think it would be better with proper grammar and being blocked out, but hey, it was still a good story so I can deal. (I am more picky than my Grandmother, the Goddess of picky...)
Author's response
first im aware i have bad grammar hahaha and i dont know how to block it out and what does bipolar mean ??? hahaha but thanks for the review
:DDD