Wow. I am left speechless. That was just plain amazing. You really do have an amazing talent; you explained everything and it felt like we were there ourselves. I felt horrible for Jay when Odie and Neil were angry... but I loved your quote there about Archie's cooking..hehe. I feel bad for Theresa too... But, once again, please update soon!!
Author's response
Thakn you so much. You have been a constant support and I will so happy. YOu really don't know how much I thank you. And I fell bad for poor Jay too. Odie + Neil = bad. So proud of Herry. Thanks. And I will.