Oh, oh shit
like fuck, man
I started readint this a few days ago as a light hearted if slightly sadistic Frerard
Safe to say i fell in love with it and ooh girl do you know how to write smut
And I loved all the characters and everything was nice
then Frank rapes Gerard but fine it can still be okay, it can still finish nicely
Next chapter see see Gerard forgave him, I mean it was a little out of the blue but that's all good
aww yay one last instalment of Frerard smut before we say goodbye- wait no -fuck shit what? efsukeflue -dies in puddle on the floor-
Anyhoo I really enjoyed this is was almost perfectly written though I will say there were a few unnessisary words repeated in descriptions at times as well as a few typos but that didn't really bother me all too much
I loved the story line and how complex all the characters I really felt a connection to each of them and their antics!
Frank was an absolute babe even when he was a dick and Gerard was a cootie turn phsycopath but I'm totally down with that
The smut my child, oh god the smut -melts- i am giving you the highest praise an anti smut reader can give and as for Frank's dirty talk it was the cherry on top!
Thank you so much for giving me nearly a weeks worth of exelent reading time and keep up the awesome work I can't wait to see more of your stuff up here hopefully soon!
Author's response
I really don't know what to say! I'm really glad you like it so much; I put a hell of a lot of time into it, and getting feedback like this is great! Don't die though!!! XD
I have a habit of repeating words, especially as I generally write whilst doing ten other things, so sometimes lose track of what I've typed! And I'm a n awful proof reader of my work, so there's always gonna be typos ~~~~ Sorry!
Again, thanks so much for this - it is amazing to hear such great feedback!!!
I'm working on another story at the moment, but it's mostly smut so you may not like if you're anti-smut. But still! Feel free to check it out!
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