Dang Milana's a betch :P I can't help but love her sassiness though. Vanilla flax seed cereal, I dunno why but that shit sounds good as hell lol. Poor Brian though, I seriously love that guy. He's doing the best he can, he deserves more credit dealing with these girlies, especialy Milana :P
I'm really surprised you wrote another chapter, think you'll be updating it soon?
Loved it.
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Milana - trust me, she'll get hers.
organic flax seed cereal - it's AWESOME. i just started eating it a couple of months ago. i'm sold. i'll have to send you a box sometime if i an ever come up with the postage. (remember the time you and i searched for the closest district that had a market french toast crunch and i found out it's in dallas, and i said we'd have to take a road trip there from lake charles just to go get a box?)
chapter 4 - yeah, it surprised me too. i was just going to start reading it, then i felt the urge to add something. yes i'll be updating it soon.
thanks for loving it. i'm not too sure about what i did to pixie in the end of that chapter and i'm starting to rethink it, but if i change my mind, i'll just rewrite something else later like harley did with Wake To Me--which i still haven't finished the script for. i need to ask her permission to make it into a film.
stay tuned for the update. i'll let you know on facebook.
i really surprised myself by adding another chapter. it was seriously on a major whim. damn.
but i asked God to give my writing mojo back and here it is. :) thanks be to God. amen.