I think this is awesome, mate. I really love your style of writing, it seems to like...flow? (Ugh, Jane, so awkward XD) so yes. I really really really really like this and can't wait for it to be updated.
You make Violet seem so likeable! And now I sound weird so I'm gonna go now...
Jane
Author's response
xD You don't sound weird. Trust me. There has been more awkwardness some place else than here. Ficwad is just one big awesomely awkward family.
And I thank you. For the, err, what I believe to be a compliment.