Review for Be My Detonator

Be My Detonator

(#) Sleeping7Beast 2012-03-13

OMG! I read this whole thing last night and it's so amazing! I laughed through the whole thing! You are a fantastic writer! Very good job! I can't wait until you update, you ended at a very evil place!

Gerard is my favorite. He's such a hopeless mess, lol. When he said he wanted to be reincarnated into a slug i wanted to die XD XD XD And when he said he hoped Frank would be a slug too so they could have slug babies and eat each others slime was awesome Bahahahahaha XD (funniest part) He's such a freak and it's great! And he's always falling and speaking jiberish, IT'S AN AWESOME GEE!

I like Frank too! He's so cool and collect, i'd like to see what he's actually thinking about when he's watching Gerard trip over everything (lol, another favorite thing). The nose fetish thing is SOO cute! -

I'm not going to lie, their first kiss was SOOO hot! OMG! O_O Like sixteen times better then any other sexy time i've ever read, and it was just a kiss??? OMG! My ovaries were screaming OH DEAR LORD I'M GOING TO KEEL OVER AND BURN IN HELL FOR ENJOYING THIS, THIS MUCH!!!! OMG XD fmfsfltnogafajk !!!! XD .... basically.

Then there was the Frank giving Gee a bj...in Jamie's room...on her bed....O_O...that was AWESOME! I give you a thousand awesome points for that! And because it was so freaking HOT! OMG!!! swoons

Ray and Mikey are awesome! Their so evil! I love when Mikey tricks Gerard! It's so funny and i can't help but think 'Poor baby is so pathetic' when Gerard get's all flustered about it!! And Ray's cat snogging ways are so funny! They are PERFECT!

Lol, when Gerard screamed at the mail-man...HAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!!! XD

Or when he was trying to hide in Ray's fro!

Poor baby -_-

Anyways, this is SOOO great! hugs You are awesome!

Please upload soon! I NEED more! I can usually wait, but right now i can't! PLEASE WITH FUCKING CHERRIES ON TOP!

XOXO

-SB