Absolutely nothing about this chapter was dull! It had me hooked all of the way through and has left me eagerly wondering what will happen next. I loved how Gerard was wary of Frank at first, it just seems to be how the protective side of Gerard would react in this story and it works perfectly. I actually let out a gasp when Mikey told Gerard about their father and I'm really excited to know what he's gonna say next.,
Great job on a really gripping chapter and I can't wait for more! :)
Author's response
Wow. Thank you so so so much! I was trying to keep it as gripping as you said but I didn't think I did so well so I'm so happy you thought it was good! I was deciding on whether or not to make Gerard over protective and dislike Frank straight away. But I wasn't sure where to go after that. I will have a new chapter up soon hopefully. Thanks a million for reviewing. It helps a tonne!!!