You're an amazing poet and this really reflected it. I'm so sorry about your loss, your mother seems like a wonderful person! I'm glad I took the time to read it because it was beautiful, full of love and heart. I can tell you allowed your emotions take over. I think you should give it to your Nan, she would love it too.
Not mopey or depressing at all.
Author's response
Thank you very much and yes, she was an extremely wonderful person! I'm really pleased that the love element of this poem came across as that was one thing that I definitely wanted this poem to be full of because love is what I did/do feel for my mother.Thanks for taking the time to review! :)