This chapter was really good! I feel so bad for Mikey after reading what his dad did to him and I love how Gerard blames himself, it just proves how much he really does care about Mikey. Another part that I thought was clever was that Gerard warned Mikey about a friend before because it truly drives home the point that Mikey has never really had a friend and should bused to painful disapointment by now.
Great chapter and I can't wait for more! :D
Author's response
Wow! You got this chapter spot on. I really wanted the thing about his friend to come through and I'm really glad you got it. I'm really happy you liked it cause I think it is the worst chapter so far. Thanks for reviewing every time. It's really helpful!