Review for Birthday Surprise!

Birthday Surprise!

(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-03-24

Lol, the mistakes are entirely my fault. Your brother sounds awesome... It's warm here, too. (I, however, think its a little too warm. But I'm odd.)

This chapter...
Well. The beginnings of some serious plot movement. Was there some foreshadowment of Vibia's demise in there I wonder? Hm... Yes, I do wonder...

Author's response

Thanks again for checking, and not changing arse to ass. :D And btw - my 'e', 'n' and 's' key don't work properly - you commented on the lack of n's in the email! XD

I'mma have to leave you wondering!!

Sx