well i love this. plot's original and there are just a few spelling mistakes (not an insult! i wrote jar instead of jaw in my story...so he hit's him in the jar :/)
longer chapters would be nice though:) and i guess not too many people are reading this, since the summary doesn't give any type of specific info so you're just like...'whatever'
damn i wanted to write a positive reviewxD I LOVE YOUR STORY! if that makes up for all the criticism:D so i'll end this massive fuckup of a review now since writing on an i pod is a pain in the ass:L x k
Author's response
Thanks. Yeah, I type mainly on my iPod and post, but I'll fix the spelling later, I promise :). I have issues with summaries, I feel like I give to much away or something, so I try to make them very vague . Thank you for your cristisism :)