This is somewhat off topic and had possibly nothing to do with the chapter but all I can think about is Mikey being left there all confused and alone. You're a great writer and I'm in love with this story, but I'm complete shit when it comes to actual reviews. I mean it was well written and you used comas properly... I guess. I'm just a commenter..
Author's response
Well your comments may not be "reviews" but i think its better to hear, more of read, what everyone thinks on the story, especially when they like it. And thanks for always leaving your thoughts on every chapter! Really helps get an idea on what everyone wants or seems to want to hear more about.