Review for Stay Together

Stay Together

(#) RockMusic 2012-04-01

The chapters aren't getting worse, they're developing I can see your writing getting better too :) it was good before but it's improving bit by bit as you realize what works for you and what your writing style is.

Author's response

Thank you very much. Im delighted that you think my writing is developing. I never write much before so I'm definitely still trying to figure out my style. Thank you for leaving quite a helpful review!