This was a really good first chaptered story! Even though 'chaptered' isn't a word...anyway! It was lovely; there was romance, there was brotherly protectiveness, there was a giant mistake that was corrected. I hope you write more soon!
OXO
Author's response
Thank you! I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed the whole story. I was unsure when I read over it again but I'm happy you like it. I shall try to have that new story/one shot up soon. Thank you for reviewing the whole way through this story. It was very helpful!