This is a great start! It's really interesting. I can't wait to see what happens when Mikey appears in the story. I really liked this and I thought it was really, really good. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Author's response
Thank you! I'm so delighted that you enjoyed it so far. It should get better Once Mikey enters the story hopefully. I hope to have another chapter up tonight. Thank you very much for leaving a review!