Wow, that was really good. Totally made me think and I just loved the whole concept and paradox. Beautifully done. Another of your poems into my favourites. Thanks for this, I was feeling like shit and reading good poems always cheers me up :)
CosmicZombie xo
P.s. Thanks for your review on the second part of my stupid rant (which I've actually added more of an explanation to now) I've responded to it now. And don't worry, your first review didn't come across as being mean at all :)
Author's response
Thank you very much! I'm really pleased that this made you think as that's what I always aim for with poetry, especially this piece. I'm extremely happy that I cheered you up with this, I hope you feel better! Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review, it means a lot coming from such a talented author/poet! :)
P.S. You're very welcome and thanks for taking the time to respond to me! I'm relieved you didn't find it as a mean thing to say. :)