I really loved this chapter and the way you portrayed Mikey's character. Mikey seems to be really vulnerable and emotionally scarred, do I can't wait to see how Frank gains his trust. I'm intrigued as to what had Gerard angry when he went into his bedroom. It made me melt a little inside the way Gerard was protective and gentle with Mikey; it was adorable! Great job and I really can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's response
Wow, I'm so so happy you liked this chapter. I am actually finding it difficult to portray Mikey through Franks eyes so I'm glad you liked it. Mikey is quite vulnerable right now so it will be hard for Frank to gain his trust. The thing that made Gerard angry isn't very big but does add alot to Mikey's depression. I hope to get more protectiveness from Gerard throughout the chapters. Thank you for leaving such a nice review. I should have another chapter up tonight!