OMG this story is just getting better and better. I can see it so clearly in my head and that flash that Gerard had really made it seem like an Dr. Who episode. While I read it I actually thought OK now we're talking lol.
It really is good. I love it so much. It's so perfect now when there's this huuuuuge hiatus until we get new episodes in September. This story is so freaking good. I'm super excited for the next part and I hope you update real soon.
Good jop with this =) I think you write really well and paint a wonderful picture of what you want things to be like. Keep it up. It's so good. No offense to other writers but it's hard to find really good and thought through stories now a days.
Ok well update soon!!!... please :P