Review for Apart
Oh My God. I feel for Mikey sooo much. I mean, Gerard is the only one that loves him anymore, the only one who he can trust, and then Gerard is like 'it was only a fling thing' and I just want to kill him! How could he do that to Mikey! And oh god, my heart is breaking a little at Mikey's pain.
This, my darling, is perfect.
Yes, maybe it is a little cliche, but you haver changed the normal story, altered it, and made it beautiful.
I love the puzzle reference, I thought that was fantastic :)
Gerard was definitely a bit of an asshole in this, but I'd like to think that he's only doing what he thought was best.
Aw, thank you very much! :D