this is a little bit confusing to me. jumping back and forth is probably going to cause my brain to hemorrhage, but it's good writing, so fuck the consequences
Author's response
Yeah, it´s not easy writing two parallel strands either. ;) (Especially when you´ve got a mind like a sieve and don´t even remember what happened in your own story...) What? Do the consequences want babies with me too? Thanks for reviewing!