hey! i remember reading this story quite a while ago and some how forgot about it because i moved house then school etcc. but today i read all of it until the end. it was awesome!! so original although very sad. i agree with one of the other reviews. you could turn it into a frikey! even though i dont really like frikey, it would be fun. thanks for the great story;)
Author's response
thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I'm sorry, the ending definitely was a bit of a downer :( you know I'm not a frikey fan either but that definitely could! And not at all, thank you for the great review :D!