It's so beautiful and so true, I agree with DisenchantedDestroya, a lot of us can relate to this. It actually reminded me of Tim Burton's poems^^ It has that beautiful-dark vibe, and it's really picturesque, too :] All in all, I love it and Gerard would be proud of you for using his quotes to write amazing poems like this one :]]
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Aww, thank you so much! I've never actually read his poems...will have to check them out :)
That's such a lovely compliment :'D Thanks so much for reviewing!