I really, really liked this, and I could totally tell you'd been listening to those songs while writing it...if that makes sense! :L Especially liked this verse:
Angels falling and sinners flying,
Too deaf to hear the living dying.
All clocks stopped and time bombs detonated,
The end needs to be celebrated.
You're so talented.
CosmicZombie xo
Author's response
Thank you very much! It totally makes sense that you could tell about the songs, I was trying my hardest to let them influence me.
Thank you! :D