This is amazing! These are wonderful lyrics. I especially loved the last few lines. That was just a moment of clarity for me. Everything made sense when I read that part. These are great lyrics, and though they're not too simple, they're simple enough to make it seem like anyone can write lyrics. I think it's a perfect mix of complexity and simplicity because some lyrics are so simple you think a baby could've written better. Others are so complex you can't understand a thing. I think this had a nice balance and was extremely well written. It really tells a story and is extremely original. I loved this. Wonderful job!!!
Author's response
Thank you very, very much!
I'm relieved that it made sense to you, I was worried that it was a little too fucked-up for anyone other than me to get.
Anyone CAN write lyrics. Trust me; if I can, anyone can.
Thank you soooooo much for taking the time to leave such a detailed review! :D