Kind of rough if you only hate him because of how he looks. X.x
Apart from that small comment... (though you have every right to whatever opinion you have) ... I liked this. Is it meant to only be a one-shot or will it be continued?
The detail was good, though it was short. It was perfect length with how you wrote it.
I love when Ryan says he loves Brendon back. It just was worded perfectly.
Author's response
It's definitely going to be continued, if I can keep the idea going in my head. I'm not exactly sure where it's going to go, but I hope it's somewhere cool. :)
Thanks so much for the support!