Review for The Kids Of The Shadows

The Kids Of The Shadows

(#) amos222 2012-04-23

That was really good. I loved the line where you said "No one wants to hear. No one wants to see". It was a bit standard at first, but then I hit those lines and I felt like had been transported and it just changed the entire mood for me. I liked this poem better than some of your others, because I feel like I can relate to this theme pretty well. It feels like exhausted youth or something along those lines that I can't phrase right. Thank you for posting!!!

Author's response

I'm glad you liked it...yeah, I did feel it was sort of cliched, but I tried to make it original too, y'know? Anyway, thanks so much for reviewing! :D