This was great! I guess Mikey just has that charm about him that makes people want to help him. Or just makes people who aren't complete idiots want to help him. I thought it was really interesting to see Pete's thoughts about Mikey. It seems like he already cares and really does want to help, so it would be really intriguing to see how that plays out in later chapters. Well, great job!!!
Author's response
Thank you! Mikey does have that likeable trait that makes people (i.e. Normal people!) want to be around him and the fact that he is oblivious to it makes him all the more cuter. I'm really glad that came through. Pete really does care about him already. He doesn't want him to get hurt by his friends. Pete will definitley have an effect on all of them and will mix things up! Thanks for reading and leaving a nice review! :)