No, it's not dragged out at all. I find if it's not dragged out or written with them knowing each other first, the romance between whoever it is doesn't feel real to me. I prefer dragged out to fast paced goings. But, actually, this doesn't feel dragged out at all. :)
And once again, return of Brendon the Ass. I swear, that made him sound like a superhero or something. XP Seriously, it will be interesting to see how much his character will grow and develop over the course of this story. :D
Extremely excited to read the next installment. Especially because I wanna know what Jon does when she doesn't call him... 0.0 Maybe Omar should be hired as a bodyguard. He looks pretty strong, and he's big (I don't mean that offensively), so people will be reluctant to mess with him. But to me, he just looks like someone who'd be good at giving cuddles! XD Cuddles with Omar Abidi, FTW! Anyone wanna join in?
Author's response
I'm glad. :) Thank you. Sometimes I just can't tell if I'm actually going somewhere or dragging it out. I always start out loving something and then tend to struggle... because I feel it should already be at the point that I'm writing and it's not. But when it's too fast, I just can't post it. And if I do then I feel like a romantic failure. (Which I sort of am.)
Haha, Brendon The Ass. That's gonna stick, I'm pretty sure.
Super sucky superhero! That flows...
Cuddling with big guys is always fun! I'll join. :P