Review for Words
This was hard-hitting and well-written, the use of boldness working perfectly with the rhythm and point of the poem. It was an absolutely stunning read and it sounds like how I feel a lot of the time, which is largely why this poem appeals to me so much.
My favorite part was;
"Let the words bleed out,
So I don’t have
To cut."
Again, I think that this was my best part because I identify with it and it really spoke to me. Something that you seem to be extremely good at. It takes a lot of talent to make a poem talk to the reader, so a huge well-done there.
Great job!
P.S. The Black Parade is awesome for inspiring poetry, isn't it?! :D
Author's response
Ahhhh, thank you so much, honey! It's how I feel a lot of the time too...hence why I wrote it :L I'm glad you identified with it, but I hope you don't feel as bad as I do sometimes, 'cause no one deserves that, plus you seem lovely and very talented.
Anyway THANK YOU again, seriously. Your support means a hell of a lot to me :'D
P.S. Ikr?! :D