i love how you write rory’s character. she's real, she's dimensional and she has character flaws. okay, I would write more in this review, but i’m at work and i want to read the next two chapters. more later, i promise…
Author's response
To me, characters are the most important element of any story. If the characters don't seem like real people you could meet out there in the real world, then it isn't worth writing the story, no matter how great the plot.