all i can say is wow,
this is one of the best one shots i've ever read (and i'm not that easily impressed when it comes to oneshots)
don't let any dumb comments get you down, they're just jealous of how much of an amazing writer you are, never doubt your talent
this is the first time i've read anything by you and you are instantly one of my favourites
you are now on my alerts btw
keep shining
Rosie :)