This was an awesome chapter!
It made me want to punch Gerard for being so cruel to Mikey when he himself knows how important it is for him to be nice to his little brother and that Mikey struggles with confidence/emotions. I can kinda see how easy it would be for Gerard to lose it though, most likely due to trying his hardest to take care of Mikey. I loved reading it in Pete's POV because it gave a real sense of how much he really does care about Mikey and I thought the nickname was absolutely adorable! However, it does kinda worry me that Pete's thinking about kissing Mikey; that really is the last thing Mikey needs right now. I can't wait to see how that one plays out.
I'm starting to edge slightly towards Team Pikey. Not sure why though, mainly because I love Pete Wentz and Pikey is my OTP. Also partially because Pete's taking a lot of risks just being friends with Mikey. Saying that though, I think the Frikey in this is absolutely adorable and Frank is just perfect. sigh
Anyway, great job and I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
P.S. I apologize for the long review. :)
Author's response
Wow! Thank you!!! I am so relieved to hear you say that. I, too, was getting angrier and angrier with Gerard the more I said but I'm very happy that you see his point. I was worried people were going completely against. Although, I'm almost against him!!! Pete would definitely want perhaps back off (?) a small bit because if he was to mess this up I think Mikey would be completely broken down and lost. I really can't decide myself which team I prefer. Frank is just so reliable and there isn't any fear of him messing up a relationship. Yet, Pete cares alot too and he is doing alot out of his way just for Mikey. I'm very very glad you see this! Thank you so much for reading and leaving such awesome reviews. I had a shit day but you definitely cheered me up! :)
No need to apologise! I love long reviews. They are the most helpful things ever!!! :)