This has to be one of my favourite poems out of the ones you've written...I really felt I could connect with it, and the last verse? Pure brilliance, honey. Seriously, the whole thing was great- the repetition worked really well, and you wrapped it up very effectively.
Thank you so much for sharing this!
CosmicZombie xo
P.S. Sorry to hear you aren't feeling happy :/ hope you're feeling better soon, and if you ever need to talk to someone, feel free to send me an email :)
Author's response
Really?! Thank you! I'm glad you thought it connectable; I try to write stuff that people can relate to, so it's really nice to hear you think that. Thank you so soooo much for leaving such a kind and friendly comment; it really does mean a hell of a lot to me. :)
Really?! Thank you! I'm glad you thought it connectable; I try to write stuff that people can relate to, so it's really nice to hear you think that. Thank you so soooo much for leaving such a kind and friendly comment; it really does mean a hell of a lot to me. :)