now, that's interesting - in a thrilling way!
stupid question, though: why did you put into a new story?
anyway, that haliled-stuff is nothing new but very original in that context, plus the songtext fits perfectly!
Author's response
Why a new story, you ask? Good question. Really, I have no idea. I just kinda felt like it should be a new story, seeing as the first one was all Delilah's point of view. And now she's, like, stopped or whatever.