This was NOT boring; I loved it!
I liked that Mikey wouldn't tell Pete at first, it gave a real sense of how thrown by this whole thing Mikey is, but then at the end he wanted to tell Pete; that just really showed us how his trust grew in Pete, even through that short period of time. The fact that Pete could understand what Mikey was feeling and that he didn't force Mikey to tell him what happened worked really well because it proved to the reader just how much Pete truly does care.
I can't wait to see where this goes next! :D
Author's response
Really?! Thank you. I'm glad it wasn't too bad. I'm happy that you saw how this whole thing effected Mikey but then saw how much he knew he could trust Pete. Pete really does care for Mikey and understands how he is feeling or atleast how upset he is. I'm relieved you saw this point as I wasn't sure if the reader could see how much trust Mikey had in Pete but how much he has lost it in Gerard and Frank. Thank you for reading and even more for leaving such a kind review!