Review for Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

Bungle in the Jungle: A Harry Potter Adventure

(#) Rake 2006-10-29

Poor Hack....maybe he should get an ice pack....the battle was great as you gave the goblins a cool power but didn't over do it like most of the authors seem to. You displayed both there weknesses and strenghts and didn't just make them amazingly powerful but opresed by the wizards...good job and keep 'em rolling

Sallute

Author's response

Thanks. I had a lot of help with finding just the right balance with making Goblins interesting, but not overpowering. They run the banks. However, it's because they are smart. They broker the deals with trolls, giants and other races that wizards wouldn't normally debase themselves with. ~Jim