This chapter was really sweet!
The fact that Mikey was scared to go back to his own home really said a lot to me about how unsure he is, about how frightened he is of the people who love him the most. I liked how the chapter ended, it was really sweet and fluffy, but also left me wondering about what it could be that Gerard and Pete were fighting about outside. Also, Mikey not knowing if he loves Pete or not; I, personally, think he does. But that could just be because Pikey is my OTP.
Great job and I look forward to more! :D
Author's response
Thank you. I'm glad you think it is okay. I thought it wasnt very good. I'm really happy to see how you noticed Mikey's current state of being unsure about it all and about who he can really trust. I'm relieved that you like the fluffy stuff at the end. I'm really bad at that kind of stuff so I'm glad to see that you liked it. Mikey is very unsure and confused as to who he loves right now. He definitely does love them both. But who the most??? Thank you very much for reading and leaving such a nice review! ;)