Good character development, introducing Logan and making him so amazingly personable. The dialog between the two and explaining their past history. I would write more, but I want to be able to catch up on this story before I go to bed. I promise to review, but they probably won’t be as lengthy as this and the last.
Author's response
I was worried about introducing outside characters to be honest. I thought i might get cries of "Noooo how could you taint the story, stick to Pete and nothing but!" However its nice to know that hes been so well recieved, im quite fond of him now! You're ace, thanks again! XX