I really liked this- it was very evocative and I could almost feel the rain on my skin as Gerard waited. I also loved how you made it feel so much in the moment by not explaining much about Frank or Gerard- it fitted the storyline perfectly, like, leaving their past and explanations and everything behind; it was just them, driving off to new beginnings. And this was awesome- 'thousand rainy Sundays and the best part of your favorite song'.
Really great. I loved it. Thanks so much for participating!
CosmicZombie xo
Author's response
thank you! so very much (: i wasn't so sure about it and i still think it could be better but nice to know you liked it anyway :D your opinion means a lot ^^ and thanks for inventing such a thing! :D