I LOVE! It has been ages since I've read more than the first few lines of a fanfiction and you my friend are a true example that there is still some good left in the world. It's the old fresh, the revival of not so cliché high schools. It's crisp and clean and interesting. A wonderful blend and you're maintaining the suspense; it's quite humorous and extremely entertaining on the whole. I must say that I found a few mistakes. Work on your punctuation and just run a spell check but otherwise it was quite fun and I'm keen for more.
Author's response
Oh my goodness. You have no idea how amazingly happy your comment has made me feel sobs Thankyou so much for the kind words and for the advice, its comments like this that motivate me to keep this story up and running, I just hope I can keep you entertained in the upcoming chapters!!