Thanks for an update. I think it's hilarious,really. She has cool parents and I like that you slyly introduced Frankie. I love that man a little too much for my own good. But not as much as I love Ryan Ross. He is the death of me. But childish crushes aside, I loved the update and really like how you're building the story. All you characters so far have their significant and identifiable personality which I believe is doing a great job in helping the reader get attached to characters. I noticed only one spelling error where you spelt 'from' as 'frpm'. An understandable typo I can bear with. Well done. Now I shall have to wait patiently for the next update but no pressure. Art shouldn't be rushed. That being said, if I don't have an update by next week, I will make sure to hunt you down and kill you. Okay, joking. Take your time and if you need any help, you know where to find me. Or not. But you get the picture.
Author's response
Oh my goodness. You have no idea how happy I am after reading your comment, this may sound incredibly sad but I really look forward to your comments; they honestly make my day. Aha what can I say? I just cant wait to get the Frerard blossoming ;) And thank-you so much for the support, if you have any ideas on where you see this story heading, feel free to drop me an email - famewhore@hotmail.co.uk (Thats what I get for trusting my sister to make me an email account -.-).
Phoebe xoxo