Review for Mine
Direct Quote: “You remind me of myself without my medication.”
I see a lot of people like this on a regular basis. It's pretty funny.
I like the upbeat tone of the second chapter. It tells a lot about what's going on without giving too much information away, kind of like what it would really be like in a club setting. I like how Jeff is not too brooding (a lot of people write him as being depressed, but I like that you don't do that here) and he's very likeable. I'm excited to see where you're going with this.