Wow. You couldn't ask for a more friggin cuter tale. I love how Pete brought Rory out of her shell, and the kiss scene was adorable. I totally get it, why the lights were out, and I can't wait to read your next update. :)
Author's response
You wrote one amazing review! I can't picture Rory as anything else but cute, I really don't think she could pull off sexy. It's just not her. If anyone has any pics of what Rory might look like, feel free to post the link in a review.