Review for Such a morbid, horrible idea but I want to see what you guys would think

Such a morbid, horrible idea but I want to see what you guys would think

(#) oh_my_mikey_way 2012-06-17

Name: ella-rose
Nickname(s): ella
Looks (split for more detail)
Eyes/skin tone: my eyes change in the light, either rich hazel with flecks of green and gold or dark green with hazel rings. i used to get bullied for having 'witch eyes'. rich ivory skin, very pale.
Hair/Makeup: short black 'scene' hair with turquoise streaks in the fringe.
Height/Weight: 5'6" (i dunno how much i weigh'
Clothing- various coloured skinnie jeans, band tee's, coverse, vans
Anything else about looks?
Personality: im pretty crazy and really hyper, i have alot of attitude and stand up for my friends no matter what.
How you fucked up? (or what did you do to be caught)? i stayed behind to help an injured friend and just as we were about to leave they found me.
How'd you die? i was shot with a staple gun repeated all over my body and then my finger nails were pealed off then i was chucked into a tank of water and drowned.
Anything else in general? i would perfer it if i didnt die, like maybe mikey saved me or some shit but i dont really care...

For the love intrest
What did you first think of the traitor? 'fuck he's hot'
Did you believe they were there to save you? no i beleived they had come to kill me