Review for Raw Power [Re-Written]

Raw Power [Re-Written]

(#) LydiaWay 2012-06-20

THAT WAS FANTISTICO. the last line made it, it was an 'inter texual reference to a previous line or comment' ;D Oh yess, who listens in Enlish lesssonss?;D

Please.. pleasse... please make this chaptered? or at least a sequel?
*Gets down on knees*

oh my godd... i can't believe i'm going to say this...

IF... IF .. IF YOU LOVE FRERARD YOU'LL WRITE MORE

*Gasps* OMFG LYDIA YOU CANT SAY THAT?!

i just did.