This isn't an audition, but I just wanted to say that this sounds a lot (or almost exactly the same) like a fic I read on livejournal called 'Mercy House.' The basic bare-bone plot sounds similar - a place where they try to fix homosexuals and bisexuals and turn them straight. That was a Panic! fic with other bandoms in it as well.
I'm not saying that you stole the idea or am judging you cause it's the same sort of thing, I just thought I'd tell you. :)
Author's response
Thanks so much for letting me know. I've never been on livejournal so I didn't know that something like this already existed. :/ Hope it doesn't turn out like that story!