Oooh, that was chilling! Well written, and your use of vocabulary was great. The length was perfect, and...I don't know. It's difficult to explain, but there was something about this I really liked, despite it's twisted darkness. The last few lines were brilliant; they made the perfect ending. Greatly enjoyed reading this, thanks so much for posting!
Lucy X_O
P.S. I am SO jealous you got to see LostALone!! D;
Author's response
The irnic thing is, I cant even spell vocabulary! Thank you lots and lots :)
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